Monthly archives: March, 2018

3/29/18

The introduction does a good job of describing Brian Cozart as a person. It also successfully acts as exposition for the author’s main topic. It could be improved by reducing redundancy in the first paragraph and fixing a minor grammatical error in the second sentence. The author cites an article describing the military’s policies on …

Research Question

What is the relationship between the United States Government and the HIV/AIDS epidemic? Blair, C. & Michel, N. (2007). The AIDS Memorial Quilt and the Contemporary Culture of Public Commemoration. Rhetoric & Public Affairs 10(4), 595-626. Michigan State University Press. Retrieved February 13, 2018, from Project MUSE database.¬†https://muse.jhu.edu/issue/12550. The trend towards public memorials underscored in …